Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Fundamentally, activities from several people giving bad effect to few of creatures in the world such as vegetables and beasts. In sight of several resident consider that this condition can't altered, whils another views assumes that every behaviour able to giving new condition. I will examine both viewpoints and convey the opinion.
In fact, nowdays, people prefer to doing some activities that injuring another creatures. The consequences of this habits became causes from extinction of beasts and vegetables. Moreover, asymmetry from people egoism giving impact to equilibrium among creatures in earth even recently we seeing many habitat of beasts disappear and being scarce. For instance, in 2010, PBB announce that any few of species from beasts was gone and this is based on act of people, and now, few of beasts should be protected by government because endangered such as cendrawasih, white tiger and others. Thats why percentage of beast mortality steadily increasing.
On the other hand, few of sight from several person declared any methods to changing situation in earth. In other words, made population from creatures living in earth being develop. Therby, level of extinction will be degenerated and can invent stability in earth such as conserving beasts and kept growt of vegetables through law determination. As illustration, in Africa, government decided to made some regulation about vegetables restriction and will give sanction if any people prohibiting the decision. So, forest in there still awake and the air very fresh.
To conclude, beasts and vegetables have close relationship to kept stability ecosystem in earth. In my opinion, bad attitude that described by personality made beasts and vegetables became threaten, on of the popular reason is because they delight to exploit existence of others organism
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...s from several people giving bad effect to few of creatures in the world such as v...
^^
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...l resident consider that this condition cant altered, whils another views assumes th...
^^^^
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'do'?
Suggestion: do
...on. In fact, nowdays, people prefer to doing some activities that injuring another c...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... another creatures. The consequences of this habits became causes from extinction of...
^^^^
Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun habitat seems to be countable; consider using: 'many habitats'.
Suggestion: many habitats
...atures in earth even recently we seeing many habitat of beasts disappear and being scarce. F...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...as cendrawasih, white tiger and others. Thats why percentage of beast mortality stead...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43006993007 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84883509725 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0725289894 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165700501442 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546329903598 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035965117759 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967683271698 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034474278052 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...s from several people giving bad effect to few of creatures in the world such as v...
^^
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...l resident consider that this condition cant altered, whils another views assumes th...
^^^^
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'do'?
Suggestion: do
...on. In fact, nowdays, people prefer to doing some activities that injuring another c...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... another creatures. The consequences of this habits became causes from extinction of...
^^^^
Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun habitat seems to be countable; consider using: 'many habitats'.
Suggestion: many habitats
...atures in earth even recently we seeing many habitat of beasts disappear and being scarce. F...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...as cendrawasih, white tiger and others. Thats why percentage of beast mortality stead...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43006993007 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84883509725 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594405594406 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0725289894 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165700501442 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546329903598 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035965117759 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967683271698 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034474278052 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.