Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world Some people think this cannot be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.
it has been worldwide observed that human activities have detrimental impacts on the natural habitat. Some people believe that they will continuously have been deteriorating the environment and nobody change the scenario. However, it is often thought that this situation can alter through a positive approach and proper action. In my opinion, I believe that these effects can overcome by initiating practical learning courses on the environment at educational and awareness programs in the local community.
To begin, the extra subject on the environment should be taught at the elementary school based on practical training and workshops. this is because children learn the significance of the biosphere, impacts of climate change on habitats and depletion of natural resources on the earth. In other words, they will be informed of how they contribute to alleviating the man's impact on the environment. For instance, for centuries, before the discovery of methane gas, a man has relied on non-renewable natural resources such as woods and coal as a source of energy resulting in almost extinction of precious species of trees. Furthermore, these programs will also assist in paving the way for research in mitigating these effects.
On the other hand, driving awareness campaigns and rallies in the neighborhood also considered an essential element to lessen human activities in surroundings. this can be done by the city administrator that would conduct it on a monthly or quarterly basis. In addition to that, they also place an advertisment on main streets and main roads to reduce the cruel actions of a man on plants and animals. Finally, in my opinion, if both citizens and administrators take joint action than these negative impacts on the environment will be lowered.
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world Some people think this cannot be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. 56
- There is huge increase in the size of cities. Many cities have grown in a haphazard way why is careful planning important in the development of cities? 67
- The table below gives statistics about the size of US households over a number of years Household all the people living together in one house Study the information and answer the question 85
- University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3109540636 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0187558552 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9293454218 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229499607928 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763432891605 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428680680372 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151513092153 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406562408481 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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