Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed while others actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is generally believed that human’s lifestyle can not be changed for the balance of nature while there are some strong arguments against that opinion, I strongly agree that human activity can be changed for the advantage of nature in some ways.
In my view, some people have their opinion that changing the lifestyle of humanity for the suitable of nature is impossible. For instance, humans can not stop destroying the jungle to build their apartments because the numbers of people are growing up every day, every month. It is all coming from the development of the health sector. Furthermore, the development of some paper company also due to the disappearance of the ecosystem because the paper is made by trees. Therefore, there exist some opinions that it is impossible to clearly stop the negative impact on plants and animals around the world.
Nevertheless, I believed that there exist some ways for humans to change for the living of nature. Nowadays, some organizations in the world have been made for the revolution of protecting the existence of animals on this planet. They keep all the rare animals in safety areas to maintain the existence of those species. Furthermore, the governments of some countries are now raising public awareness of people on keeping reproduced wastes if possible and using fewer nilon products to protect the environment.
In conclusion, governments and people in many countries can have their own ways to change for mother nature. Therefore, our planet can maintain its fresh last longer by every individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12549019608 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75118652534 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9818560512 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287873032453 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10025061222 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887737317513 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177102885323 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760943762564 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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