Human beings do not need to eat meat in order to maintain good health because they can get all their food needs from meatless products and meatless substitutes. A vegetation diet is as healthy as a diet containing meat. Argue for or against the opinion above.
Nowadays people are becoming more conscious about the products that they are consuming. In choosing the food for the families they consider not only the taste but they also take into account balanced and moderate eating as the issue of obesity is frequently discussed these days. Recent interest to vegetarian diet is being fuels by activists trying to discredit the health benefits of animal food. A vegetarian diet is broadly defined as a diet excluding animal products such as meat, poultry and fish. However, I am skeptical about the idea that people do not need to eat meat to be healthy.
First of all, meat is a rich source of protein that the human body needs to survive. Vegetarians can get protein from products such as beans, grains, seeds and soy products. Therefore, if there is enough protein provided to satisfy daily requirement the human can totally be healthy without meat.
However, as I know, proteins which are contained in meat are easier to digest and absorbed by the body. Secondly, the amount of vitamins in plants is less, so. For instance, to get sufficient amount of calcium from vegetables you need to eat 3 kg of potato per day.
So taking into account all said above I believe that vegetarian diet is not so balanced diet. I am totally convinced that vegetarians do not consume meat because of moral and ethnic side of the issue. And I agree that people shouldn’t kill wild animals but instead they should eat specially bred livestock for eating purpose. Furthermore, reducing the meat amount and having the balanced diet consisting of both vegetables and meat is ideal for health and it might eliminate the arguments about the issue of healthiness of vegetarian diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88620689655 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56448115898 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562068965517 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2657045723 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402788862708 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12250678168 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567012427562 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227630966701 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432722073321 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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