Many people believe that advertising helps to selling the products which does not require by people much more. I totally agree with the sale amount of well liked properties are because of the advertisement and today’s world is full of promotion.
Firstly, social media is one of the main way for earning money in these days and all people have social media account. So, they spend plenty of their times on social media in a day and get influenced for buying things they see in commercials. Because, influencers or other advertisers make the society feels as vitally necessary by sharing their experiences. It makes people feel so poor that they can't have what they see on TV or on social media. Hence, even though people do not need that popular goods, they buy anyway like robots.
Secondly, commercial of a good commonly promise more than its value by exaggeratedly. In that way, we think this good is most increadible thing in the world and our first requirement is that good. Power of feel in this manner, is so terrifying and makes everything to the people. I believe, advertisement sector will be grow significantly more with the help of the technology development because nowadays we buy everything online. In addition, online shopping is deputy of advertising when we do not see the money perceptibly.
In conclusion, adversitement has great power on the sales rate of popular goods and people buy wares which they do not really need. I strongly agree with the ability of advertisement on people.
- The diagrams below show The life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant Write at least 150 words 100
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people 67
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons when relevant 78
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... It makes people feel so poor that they cant have what they see on TV or on social m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, firstly, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9296875 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7978786607 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7418084692 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149162113797 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544731268872 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390672148501 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101134165593 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373886189691 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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