learning foreign leangue for a children in primary school is better then Secondary school thats thinkrd by sompe people.This essay will suggest that learning primary stage to make eassy for a student and pressure of extra lenuage learning is primary disadvantage .
The main reason behind the introduction foreign language in primary classroom is a belife 'younger the better'.The idea taht yong childern are intrenscally better lenguage learning and will become more proficient more quickely.In England they introduce foreign language in their primary curriculum in 2014.
Despite these aevantage,many chilren can not take extra pressure of learning foreign lenguage . As a resut childdren effort more time fore reading that,s why their outer activity will burden.beause of their stop outer activty children's humen activity will burden.
In concuasion,learning forign language in primary level is good for children ope with forign lenguage more comfortable but their abality but again their capacity will be minded
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72185430464 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91768395507 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649006622517 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2897031896 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.8 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226457260105 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120468937986 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097227727451 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146412910666 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919516271911 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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