IELTS Writing Task 2: Some People Work For The Same Organization All Their Working Life. Others Think That It Is Better To Work For Different Organizations. Discuss Both These Views And Give Your Own Opinion.
Getting a professional life is a "sweet" challange in individual's life. To be at the peak of someone's life has various paths which bring endless argument. Some opinions accept to have only job until the retire while others believe that switching jobs provide job attainments.
The reason for people to work in the same place is comprehensible. Once you get familiar to the job environment, have enough salary to live and dependable co-workers, there is no motivation to change your job. A visible evidence is that nearly 3 million British are government employees. Futhermore, your life would be extremely comfortable with assuring of having a considerable opportunity to promote and no scary of being fired suddenly.
In contrast, shifting jobs for various companies is an arduous path. The boss is always seeking for multi-talented employees. Without being an erudition or a skilled labour, you would be definitely laid off. Otherwise, for instance, the employer does not have any hesitation paying the highest salary for a computer expert who both makes different platforms, programming languages and the problem-solving skill is excellent. Hence, if you have ablities, you will not only get a higher standard of living but also enlarge your white-collar knowledge.
In conclusion, sticking to one company for a long life is benifical for professional growth while altering companies develops personal and professional life. The decision depends on your viewpoint, however, it is expected to opt for changing organizations for a more brilliant career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Getting a professional life is a 'sweet' challange in individu...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...ment. Some opinions accept to have only job until the retire while others believe t...
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Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... opinions accept to have only job until the retire while others believe that switching job...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable assuring'.
Suggestion: comfortable assuring
...uthermore, your life would be extremely comfortable with assuring of having a considerable opportunity to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46721311475 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22429261797 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659836065574 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8759847846 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209647375773 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715520284883 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747740105452 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120702386388 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337714061981 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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