If racism and xenophobia are attitude that we are taught, not born with, then the problems that come from them can be resolved.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
To discuss racism is always debatable issue. In many countries racism and xenophobia are buried in deep valley, although it is still in existence in some undeveloped countries or even sometimes appear in developed or developing countries in the form of hate crime. Despite the variety and ambiguity here I would discuss this view and give my opinion afterwards.
To begin with, racism and xenophobia are social diseases and once it burst out it spread like epidemic. Any child does not born with the thought of racism, but it is taught either by family members or by society. Moreover, once racism flourish in one’s mind he or she suffer from xenophobia. In some tribal area, for an illustration, some people of two different casts have contempt for each other that sometimes resulted in riot and homicide. In addition, the feeling of revenge infuriate the anger of people who belong to suffering cast or society.
Generally, this phenomenon take birth due to contempt toward other cast or society, or sometimes people of one race believe they are superior than people of different races. For an example, in past white skined people hate black people. However, this all attitudes as mentioned above are not genetically inherited in child, that means it is taught.
To sum up, according to me, if racism and xenophobia are taught, then the problems that come from them can be resolved too. If everyone try to understand born is not of our choice otherwise every child has aspire to take birth in the thorough-breed family. The best way to remove both from society is raise voice against them those gives stimulation rather tolerate racism; the best example is Nelson Mandela who opposed racism, and get tremendous success in Africa.
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I think your essay is quite
I think your essay is quite interesting. Though, I'd advise you to use Nelson Mandela as an example. Recently we discussed an essay about this person on our forum http://essay-writer.club/forums/t/can-anyone-help-write-nelson-mandela-essays/ where you can find some ideas to enrich your essay. When you try to gain your point of view it is always better to show an example. Nevertheless, your essay is good and totally explains your personal point of view.
To discuss racism is always debatable issue.
To discuss racism is always a debatable issue.
once it burst out it spread like epidemic.
once it bursts out it spreads like epidemic.
once racism flourish in one’s mind he or she suffer from xenophobia.
once racism flourishes in one’s mind he or she suffers from xenophobia.
the feeling of revenge infuriate the anger of people who belong to suffering cast or society.
the feeling of revenge infuriates the anger of people who belong to suffering cast or society.
this phenomenon take birth due to
this phenomenon takes birth due to
If everyone try to understand
If everyone tries to understand
The best way to remove both from society is raise voice
The best way to remove both from society is to raise voice
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