Imagine you have a abroad friend and they will have spend a day in my hometown. You need to recommendation about interest places and what need to do
Dear Peter
I know you are want going to my how town next month and will spend a day in my hometown, so I feel really happy and looking forward to your arrival in this beautiful land. So if you going to my hometown I always ready for become your tour guide and recommend to you many interest places and what they can must do when going there. My hometown is Ca Mau city and its is very famous about sea-food so I think you need to try our sea-food including crab or shrimp it’s so fresh and delicious. Second, I want to take you to my favorite place is Hung Vuong Park, it is a natural park in my hometown and have many people dancing there so if you going there you will feel comfortable and relaxing after a long day at work, especially people in my hometown all friendly and hospitable so you can ask they something you don’t understand.
Look forward to seeing you soon!
Best Wishes,
Huynh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...guide and recommend to you many interest places and what they can must do when go...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, second, so, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2865497076 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26487234274 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2756739341 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420075913244 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198218562375 0.084324248473 235% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913388974683 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258957098168 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163612591768 0.056905535591 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 50.2224549098 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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