Imagine your wheel of destiny spins and you get 10 million dollars as suprise money.how would you spend it and why?
People run after money for the whole of their lives, but when asked what they exactly do if they get a surprise chunk of money, then majority of the brains go vacuumed as they have never had thought of it. Now, when I am shot with this question of suddenly getting 10 million dollars, pondering over it,l feel it is very important to plan the spending as it is said for money, "easy to come, easy to go."
I would not like to put all my eggs in one basket,so l would have an aristocratic villa built far from the urban setting with all the luxuries imagined. l would go for a world tour with my family as I feel that one should salute God for creating this beautiful earth full of scenic landscapes by not missing even a part of it.
As the saying goes, "A Penny saved is a penny earned," l would like to keep aside one-fourth part of my money as savings. It will leave me with a fixed income, self-dependence and a security for lifetime.
It is tightly said," If you don't speculate, you can't accumulate," so my third part would be of investment. I would intelligently invest my money in certain stocks, which would help me earn some quick bucks in short time. Besides this, I would have my business set up to multi fold the money.
Last part would go in charity as l believe it is our responsibility to give back to the society to express gratitude towards God. I would open a trust funding education for orphans and needy children as it is my strong belief that children are the future of the nation and educating them is a great help to the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, then, third, i feel, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44027303754 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63956493676 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.3995646754 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.1 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156440073468 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613795391149 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431365243623 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810632152065 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513722011209 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.