Improvement in health education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations However the government of richer nation should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such area

Today, their is a great need of progress in developing nations. Developed countries are blessed with advance teachnology and sufficient resources in the fields of trade, education and health. poorer territories need to seek help from developed colonies to improve themselves.

I claim that being in a period of 21st century, i want to be a part of developed economy so that i can enjoy basic necessities. Firstly, developed countries have ample of doctors and nurses can help poor countries. They can provide their well equiped machines to underprivileged nations. For example, United States is a d...

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Average: 8.6 (5 votes)

their is a great need of progress
there is a great need of progress

Richer are becoming more wealthier
Richer are becoming much wealthier

Sentence: Developed countries are blessed with advance teachnology and sufficient resources in the fields of trade, education and health. poorer territories need to seek help from developed colonies to improve themselves.
Error: teachnology Suggestion: technology

Sentence: They can provide their well equiped machines to underprivileged nations.
Error: underprivileged Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: equiped Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: In developing nations people are to fulfil their needs.
Error: fulfil Suggestion: fulfill

Sentence: Richer are becoming more wealthier and poorer are turning to be beggaes.
Error: wealthier Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: beggaes Suggestion: beggars

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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.842 21.0
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1465 1500
No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.195 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.839 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.842 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.203 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.526 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.456 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
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