Today, their is a great need of progress in developing nations. Developed countries are blessed with advance teachnology and sufficient resources in the fields of trade, education and health. poorer territories need to seek help from developed colonies to improve themselves.
I claim that being in a period of 21st century, i want to be a part of developed economy so that i can enjoy basic necessities. Firstly, developed countries have ample of doctors and nurses can help poor countries. They can provide their well equiped machines to underprivileged nations. For example, United States is a d...
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Sentence: Developed countries are blessed with advance teachnology and sufficient resources in the fields of trade, education and health. poorer territories need to seek help from developed colonies to improve themselves.
Error: teachnology Suggestion: technology
Sentence: They can provide their well equiped machines to underprivileged nations.
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Sentence: In developing nations people are to fulfil their needs.
Error: fulfil Suggestion: fulfill
Sentence: Richer are becoming more wealthier and poorer are turning to be beggaes.
Error: wealthier Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: beggaes Suggestion: beggars
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
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No. of Different Words: 155 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
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Sentence Length SD: 8.203 7.5
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