An increase nunber of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowdays, it can be seen that online shopping has become significant part of every individual. Therefore, the number of those people increase day by day who tend do do buy things online. there are many advantages and disadvantages which will be discussed further.
To begin with advantages, first of all, people do not have to spend number of hours at shopes for shopping. this is possible because of the development of online shopping, people are able to purchase every thing like, cloths, home accessory and many more while siting at home as well as while working in office . Apart from this, people can get more discount if they like to buy things online in comparison to mall and stores. people can pay by different methods of payment such as, internet baking and credit card and they do not have to bring a huge amount of money with themselves while shopping. In these days, it do not wastes valuable time of people. For example, now any individual can do shopping by online any time, because such online shoppes open for 24 hours like amazon,flipkart and some others.
However, there are some advantages of this phenomenal development in sophisticated era. Firstly, people sometime do not get good quality of products, because there are some companies who run online shopes with fake names. Their target is inocent people who like to do showing online, but they do not familiar with that type of company. Consequently, they spend a great deal of money for particular product, but they do not get good quality of thing. Secondly, the value of local departments and malls decreasing every day, because the attitude of modern people surged towards online shopping.
In conclusion, there is no surprise that the results of online shopping are tremendous in every people"s life, but there are numerous advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00977198697 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70243014516 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8680960286 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1333333333 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147716832014 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574891429531 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439663463682 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104507235801 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322231154767 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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