With the increase in use of the internet, books will soon become unnecessary.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The issue of ubiquity of internet has been heartedly debated by people these days. A scant number of citizen youth thought materials of books will become unnecessary;however, I would argue that I strongly agree with them. In the following composition, I will explore the rational for my viewpoint on this matter.
Although only small monitory of people may view that as harmful trend , I feel it is an extremely positive sign. there do exist reasons. The glaring justification for believing this would be that web-based has been attainable as well as have plentiful knowledge along with exquisite of information. there are ample studies being performing on the global level to detect the amount of those who use internet and whose use books for reading. A case in point, recent Washington post article about a shoking measure of addicts Internet. it was noted that 70%of those who read any piece of information from internet and reminded are utilized book. Thus, this article prove that, there has been a great deal of people restore to internet because it is easy and fast. So, internet has become big deal instead of book.
Not only does mature adults used internet but also youngster. As we has observed in school engage with pupils by using tap instead of book. only few individuals say it's tremendously perilous.
In sum , I maintain that book after few decade will disperse because of globalization and progression of technology. In the foreseeable future, I hopefully book will be more interesting to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04780876494 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8384235561 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2170575812 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1875 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299047815975 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849745767503 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594194464605 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168057937217 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477090833986 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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