With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers,fewer people are using traditional handwriting . Some people think that the handwriting will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that handwriting will soon be a thing for the past. I totally agree with the aforementioned viewpoint, and this essay will discuss several rationales.
For a start, technology makes everything much faster and more convenient, which is a considerable upside for those easily making spelling as well as grammatical mistakes. To give an illustration, according to the statistics, 90% of American youngsters between the age of 5 and 7 use computers. Most of them can type 40 percent more correctly than traditional handwriting, which is a stem from simply hitting the delete button.
Another cause to support this concept is that typewriting is more straightforward and legible, which is no longer hours in joined-up writing classrooms. Moreover, writing on the keyboard is considered good news for people who are left-handers with the obsession of smudging. On top of that, doctors also take advantage of computers because of their illegible handwriting which leads to the number of incorrectly given medications to patients.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, well, as well as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41463414634 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22671035675 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719512195122 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9618624322 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132679567822 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538191795354 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392269977398 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880099958638 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418703342455 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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