An increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development?
In contemporary life, there has been a growing trend towards jobs and accommodation changes in human’s lifetime. In my opinion, this phenomenon has both sides.
On the one hand, moving to new offices and houses brings to dweller a variety of adverse effects. The biggest issue they have to suffer is cost and time of leaving to other places and settling in. There will be a loss of seniority allowance when employees quit works, consequently, it costs time to find new opportunities and get use to an unfamiliar workplace. Meanwhile, the same complication would be caused when they have a change in their home when residents have to pay for new furniture and make friends with neighbors.
On the other hand, some changes of career and workplace are also considerable benefits for individuals. People will not find any superiority for their whole life unless they explore and experience what they have ever known. In other words, new offices and rooms can be an improvement of working and living condition, or basically, bring them the most suitable places. Furthermore, keep changing will renew themselves and educate dwellers other features from new colleagues and next-door friends. An example would be that many teachers now want to move to business domain after they feel bored with their work. Most popular among them is Jack Ma, the co-founder of Alibaba Group who is the richest Chinese billionaire.
In conclusion, although getting new jobs and living in new houses could make citizens meet some troubles, there is still numerous advantages to support this idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10384615385 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67887859608 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2873809331 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.076923077 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145102173319 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467108145382 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377955558009 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715403580516 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520596753235 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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