The increased world demand for oil and gas has made it necessary for locating these sources in remote and untouched areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these natural areas?
Nowadays, there is a growing proportion of the world’s population tends to give birth to a child at a later age. This phenomenon is mainly contributed by the thinking of having adequate career achievements before marrying. In my opinion, I believe that the cons would eclipse the pros, and in this essay, I will present two points of view.
There are several cogent reasons that lead to the inclination of delaying childbirth. Firstly, due to the significance of the labour market, many people are more likely to have the propensity for prioritizing their careers over taking parental roles. Many teenagers tend to lay a sound foundation for their later careers at an early age rather than giving birth. As a consequence, they would have more opportunity to move up the career ladder, achieve a prosperous life. Secondly, the more mature they are, the better education they give to their children. Admittedly, having passed through a massive number of obstacles, teenagers would have a deeper understanding of life, such as how to deal with temptations or manage their money effectively. This experience may play a prerequisite in rearing children in the right way.
Besides the advantageous influences mentioned before, the paradigm shifts of having pregnancy in later life may bring some adverse repercussions. It is undeniable that giving birth later may result in higher health risks for their child, or even in the worst-case scenario, miscarriage may occur. For example, Down Syndrome is one of the most notorious effect of having delayed children’s birth, making their child’s cognitive development unstable. Furthermore, postponing their children’s birth can result in a clash of personality. Due to the significant gap, people cannot understand their children’s thinking and may find hinder to communicate with them.
To conclude, occupational prioritization is the apparent reason why many people tend to delay their childbirth. Although this phenomenon can help them to organize their children in the right way, we cannot overlook some detrimental problems with the health risks, such as the possibility of infertility.
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- The increased world demand for oil and gas has made it necessary for locating these sources in remote and untouched areas Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these natural areas 11
- In some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life What are the reasons Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3869047619 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04025687205 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3828435531 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.470588235 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0472109832767 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163329701155 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0184414629475 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0281796806596 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186197204399 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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