In modern times, a large number of people who want to buy a lot of products from the website online is increasing. This trend has several advantages and disadvantages for both customers and suppliers as well.
It can be said that buying something from website online has some noteworthy positive effects. The main advantage of online shopping is that people can order goods when they work at their office, while others have to spend lots of time at in-store shopping to choose some items. As a result, people can reduce pressure on time, and they will possibly spend more time with their family. Another advantage is that people can save money. A good example is that some online stores often give their customers a coupon or free shipping. Consequently, buyers can save a large amount of money, if they do not pay for parking fee or transportation fee
On the other hand, there are several negative aspects that should be taken into consideration. The most weakness of this trend is customers can receive some bad products from the unreliable store because they do not have real experience using the products what they need online. For instance, some online store will update their products that have edited with lower price in order for competing with others, and these stores are not responsible about replacement policy for buyers. Therefore, some customers tend to choose products with lower price and shimmering images online which make them buying unused items.
In conclusion, it is worth considering that there are both positive aspects and weak points of people are more likely to buy more products from the online store.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In modern times, a large number of people who want to buy a lot of product...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00364963504 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48365373666 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2899584094 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22667054016 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880193619216 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449280808647 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149720714433 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482214787484 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.