People are doing more online shopping due to digitalization era. Market trend has been shifted from offline to online because of multiple factors in the market. In this essay, we will discuss pros and cons of digital shopping for both consumers and companies.
It is considered by some that buying online product make consumers life more comfortable and convenient, where people order to product anytime anywhere in the world. To illustrate,consumer can buy branded items in the discounted price, which is very low price compared to offline buying. We will pay online from different ways as debit card, credit card, and paytm which companies will provide many benefits as point redeem, discount on fix bill amount and gift vouchers. However, consumer will take many benefits through doing online transaction. Company give discount on product which they will take more profits.
On the other hand, sometimes, people did not receive same product as mention in the picture. That's why consumer disappointed from the product and they will return to the company. Due to these reason, it effects on companies reputation. Company manufacture a product in the bulk and sometimes, it will not prepare well. However, companies will destroy the product and start new production. Therefore, companies will not take much profit on the product.
In conclusion, buying online items will help to us, which people will save them time. online trend is better than offline trend.
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consumer
...ime anywhere in the world. To illustrate,consumer can buy branded items in the discounted...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...same product as mention in the picture. Thats why consumer disappointed from the prod...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...any. Due to these reason, it effects on companies reputation. Company manufacture a produ...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Online
...o us, which people will save them time. online trend is better than offline trend. ...
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Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine trend is better than offline trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22553191489 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66066700964 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582978723404 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7057024691 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.75 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690185714175 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264778685893 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314561012362 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050119636837 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205170989147 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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