An increasing number of people are now using a dating sites to meet their second halves; do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good.
Give your opinion. Provide relevant examples if necessary.
In this modern era, people tend to choose their life partner their own. However, many people believe that online dating sites are not a viable option. In my opinion, there are some advantages and disadvantages of online dating sits.
To begin with, there are many reasons why many people nowadays using online dating sites. Firstly, online dating sites are so reliable and easy approaching to anyone, these site gives you thousands of options to choose. It gives you the chance to meet new people until one can find the right person. Secondly, online dating is so convenient and more effective for busy people, in this modern era or age people are very busy with their hectic lifestyle, therefore they tend to choose the online sites to meet someone whom they are interested in. for example, a friend of mine is working in a multinational company and he did not even think about the marriage. Last year he creates a account in a matrimonial site and met a girl, within six months they got married.
However, there are some disadvantages of online dating, like people can be threatened by someone whom they do not know. Because these sites never ask of any proof of once information, in that case, these sites should have asked for any verification of the person. Moreover, it is not good to meet someone alone in a restaurant and any other place, because there are many dangerous people who are seeking for an opportunity to take advantage of girls.
In conclusion, although online dating is effective for single people but there are some disadvantages of online dating as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 681, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...bout the marriage. Last year he creates a account in a matrimonial site and met a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83823529412 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51938848515 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2508100804 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236864051904 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913620282889 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418091266983 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149627398034 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468174738644 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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