an increasing number of people are now using a dating website to meet their second halves. Do you think these tendency help people or does harm than good?
In this modern era, most of the individuals are seeking their partner in life by the using of dating applications or websites. I believe that online gating platform has benefits and it will help people, but it has drawbacks too.
on the one hand, online dating website helps people a most to find their partner by their choice. To begin with, local people are connected with a small number of people and they have less choice to find their second halves, but online application is connected globally. So they have more choices to find and they find the perfect match for them. Secondly, there are different types of websites and applications to get better preference and also they get similar options. While communicating with other members of that platform at local and globe stages, it becomes easy.
On the other hand, some drawbacks take place while people are using a dating website. To commence with, more compatibility issue was announced by media in the users of it. Because of the high rise in divorce rates is a problem of miss use of that platform. People do miss use of dating application to do fraud with some people and its have to pay cost badly. Somehow they lose their social image and after that, it's hard to find for better halves. Moreover, there are countable websites, who sell a data of the users to other companies and it will be harmful for user to leak their personal details.
To recapitulate ,I believe that people can find their perfect halves by their own choice from using dating websites. Howerver, some activities of people feel unsafe to use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75724637681 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42151264347 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528985507246 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6500727166 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255426748039 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901026457194 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824462975557 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165102063028 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509411950018 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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