An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life time. Is this a positive or negative development?
In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in the change in career and accommodation. While it is argued by many that this phenomenon is beneficial to people due to better and more appealing environment the latter jobs can offer, there still remains some arguments against this issue. Overall, it is my personal view that there are both positive and negative effects.
On the upside, when taking on a new job, people may be more motivated. They may feel bored with doing rituals day by day and would like to try in a completely new corporation. Sometimes young employees also fail to gain job satisfaction due to working environment, conflicts with boss and colleagues. The latter occupation, therefore, may be more attractive to them by the affluence and chance of promotion in career path that it offers. Moreover, new jobs always contain challenges that require people to be familiar with. They also stimulate creativity, diligence and self-discipline in employees. In consequence, workers will create more products for the company.
There are also many advantages associated with the change of residence which comes along with a career change. It gives people the opportunities to make new friends, enjoy new cultures and experience new climates. In other words, it adds spice to life.
On the other hand, when it comes to the disadvantages, the shift in jobs and career costs not only the organization but also the individuals who take it a great deal of time and money. To the corporations, it is a tremendous damage when employees abandon their jobs because of the cost companies must cover in new recruitment and training staffs. It also takes people a long period of time to be familiar with all the tasks. Moreover, the cost of shifting their accommodation to the new areas should be taken into account.
By ways of conclusion, that many people change their jobs and place of residence contains benefits as well as drawbacks. I strongly believe that changing careers and place of residence several times during a lifetime may bring some challenges in life but overall it is a more positive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ing staffs. It also takes people a long period of time to be familiar with all the tasks. More...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as well as', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25831202046 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.130434782609 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0920716112532 0.0946595960268 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0562659846547 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0460358056266 0.0437548338989 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115089514066 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0281329923274 0.0403226058552 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88572284567 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332480818414 0.0326793684256 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0818414322251 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0230179028133 0.021408717616 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0153452685422 0.011925033212 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2123.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 354.0 316.048096192 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99717514124 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341807909605 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251412429379 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203389830508 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141242937853 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88572284567 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 60.1640055146 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6315789474 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.537062217 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.736842105 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 43.7728218852 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.72527472527 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246305192352 0.332605444948 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0804348764025 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0594463972586 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518704965063 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139880907226 0.148594505496 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896731949042 0.134430193775 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779333760275 0.0742795772207 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276655282761 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0823118722589 0.0638462369009 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178140012554 0.228012699653 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11508264471 0.058150111329 198% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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