with grow of the cities and increasing in the population of all residential areas the traffic and crowded are a common feature in all of these big cities .also, there are more possible ways such as improve in the transportation system to provide cheap and easy service. but it seems that rising in the price of petrol can have significant influence on people behavior.
most of car owner trend to use private car because give them this facility to have freedom for have their scheduled and not need to be restrict. you able to park near your work's building and this means you not need tired yourself for walking or hesitate to recieve bus in morning. all of us want this conveniant method and it can led to traffic jam and pollution that we are witness nowaday. increase in the price of fuel could persuad us to utelize common transportation more than past .it can to change our plans and limit our ability.
beside that, governments need money for development and inhancement transport system . they can use from this fund that will obtained from increasing of petrol price . it is clear that an structure same as subway intail more efforts and facilities . these new technologies aren't cheap and the money obtained from members could encourage society to ask governments to invest in transportation system .it could have more advantege for them with solve traficc and pollution of cities.
in conclusion, it was shown that increasing in fuel price can lead to less use of perivate cars an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80155642023 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62536557049 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9368814009 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121235201522 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447692772763 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281075855924 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726686282018 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194391392175 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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