With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform.
What are there advantages and disadvantages to this trend.
The advent of new technology has meant that nowadays, machines are more than capable of doing many of the tasks and job that people used to do . There are both pros and cons to this development one of the main advantages of having machines do work relates speed anf efficiency. Machines tend to be much faster and more efficient at doing repetitive type tasks such as those performed in factories. Moreover the human error factor is eliminated further saving time and cost. Although machines might require a more expensive initial outlay, their long term usage is much more economical than paying human wages by the time factors such as sick leaves annual leave and wasted time included.
However, there are also several drawbacks . Machines can not be used for every task, as often the human touch is necessary in completing certain tasks. For instance, a machine can not as yet interface with a customer or client in the same way as a human employee. Nor can they create new ideas or concepts in the innovative way that people can. Machines are also unable to show initiative . In addition, many types of machinery require considerable ans sometimes costly maintenance which can reduce their overall cost effectiveness.
All in all, machinery certainly has its place in society , supporting and freeing up people's work time so that they are able to concentrate on more interesting work and work to their strength. However machinery also has it is limitation and these need to be recognised in weighing up their advantages and disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98062015504 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71223694406 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3266743696 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242577615791 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772319812368 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705727253352 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143154601732 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454333420179 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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