The environmental issue has been critical over the recent years. It is often argued that the only by the authorities and powerful companies could better the environment. However, in my view, I partially agree with that and I opine that not only the government and corporations, but also every person are vital in terms of the environmental improvement. In the following essays, my opinions will be elaborated in two sided.
It is essential for every individual to spare no effort to protect the environment as the power of collect effort is tremendously potent. In the event that every person does their utmost to maintain the environmental standard, the degradation of environment would probably be mitigated. To demonstrate, imagine that every individual classifies any sort of waste into different categories to ensure the reusable refuge be recycled. In this way, we could drastically curtail the refuge which human produced and could therefore, alleviate the environmental pollution. As a result, the effect of individuals taking collective action is surely effective.
On the other hand, it is irrefutable that the government and enterprises are influential on improving environment. In terms of government, the authorities are capable of taking more powerful action to improve the environment. A case in point is that government could formulate the policy and enact the laws to strictly implement the environmental protection. More specifically, the authorities could impose tax on private car user. This could substantially decline diminish the air pollution produced by the automobile. As for the enterprise, renewable energy could be taken advantage of to ensure the sustainable development. For instance, replacing the fossil fuels with solar, wind, and water energy could curtail the carbon emissions.
By way of conclusion, as argued above, I firmly believe that individual effort, the authorities, and corporations are of vital essential in terms of improving environment. For the betterment of environment, all of which should spare no effort.
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- Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sided' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sides'.
Suggestion: sides
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, as for, for instance, sort of, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52996845426 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24556777118 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1801689671 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3888888889 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130819389674 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441851122695 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410813067391 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867041013888 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277958112518 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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