In today's competitive world it has become essential for individual to give themselves priority instead of focusing on other issues. However, this contemporary approach has made people selfish and developed an urge of dominating. Some people opine that it is good for us to follow our traditional values of respecting family and community for creation of a better world. This essay will discuss both the views.
Overall, people need to ensure their survival in this rapid developing world irrespective of moral values because what matters the most is to become successful nowadays. Individual have realized without greed there's no success because if a person is satisfied with what he has achieved he would stop taking efforts further. In addition, due to increase in competitions in corporate as well as educational world it has become vital for people to prove their worth timely. Consequently, Individuals develop a sense of greed in order to either secure promotion or top in the class. Also because of such competitions, people tend to become selfish by either using other persons for their achievement or stealing their ideas and work.
However, inheritance of traditional values such as respect might help reduce the selfishness because being selfish creates hatred amongst people. But if we start admiring people and help them in their work it would create a more sustainable environment. Also some people tend to become dominant as they begin to earn hefty and take responsibility of their family. Nevertheless, this dominance doesn't persist until workplace and individual starts dominating even family members and sometimes even disrespects them. But if the individual keeps his ego aside and respects his family and spends sometime with them it would make him/her feel comfortable and the bonding would strengthen even more. For example, if a person working as a manager respects his subordinates as well as family he would have a pleasant time working with his colleagues and even get some relief of the work stress.
In conclusion, though individual greed and selfishness are prevailing over the years and setting a base for modern society, it is essential for people to follow certain older approaches of sustaining to keep a healthy bond with family and community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25683060109 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82480893556 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1476743587 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311239962033 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985703704403 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727724055369 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192362061994 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393771876799 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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