Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in.
In current competition era, people are more busy in earning money and they don't have time for their family. Human become much envious toward other member of their society and day by day the word "respect" and it's visibility is declining gradually. Some opined that we should get back toward our old tradition and do respect to our family as well as all member of our society to make better universe for life. I, personally strongly agree with the given notion.
To begin with, modern generation is more busy in using technology for lucrativeness. To illustrate, they are using every resources available in order to make their business more profitable. Hence, they are not able to give time to their family or friends. To be more specific, they have greed of earning money and become more rich than other. In result of this, the tradition of our ancestors is extincted. Counting money is became first priority of most of the modern people than spending time with their family. For instance, in many family children can't able meet their father on whole week except on holiday. When children wake up father already leaved for job and when father returned home at night children already go for sleep. This should be critical problem because it may effect growth of children.
Moreover, one became more selfish than he/she ever before. In contrast, Life in the past was too simple. People respected each other and helped each other when needed. One was spend time with their family every day by sitting together or by eating together. In the past they were habituated of sitting with their community and discussed any problem if any. There were very less divorce than now because they believed in each other and loved truly.
To further emphasizing my view point, If people start to obey their ancestor traditions and spend some quality time with their family the result would be surely on positive side. Their children would definitely become more mature than now and they also do respect of their parent in the future which will eventually benefits to the current generation. Otherwise, many consequences may come in between which will be tough to handle surely.
To recapitulate, it's important to earning money but family is more important than that. People should come back to their old tradition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...are more busy in earning money and they dont have time for their family. Human becom...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...cestors is extincted. Counting money is became first priority of most of the modern pe...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... For instance, in many family children cant able meet their father on whole week ex...
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Line 3, column 783, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ould be critical problem because it may effect growth of children. Moreover, one b...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... helped each other when needed. One was spend time with their family every day by sit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, in contrast, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96143958869 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47586268779 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526992287918 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.088272143 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4166666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2083333333 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170531037058 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481552221489 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371487033896 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096622199724 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365116561628 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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