nowadays men’s sports are given far more attention by the society compared to women’s sports. What are the reasons for that? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Over a few decodes the sports became more famous The interest of the society increasing dramatically towards games However, more support has been given to male sports than female sports This essay shall analyzed the causes of this phenomenon and effect of it on the development. I, personally feel that it could have negative effect on the growth of the society.
There are many reasons of this problem. First and foremost the mentality of the society influenced women to show their talent. To illustrate, people think that women should only sit at home, grow her children and cook for family Especially older people think that it would be shameful in their cast of women play games on the ground in front of others. In result, more women did never get much changes to show their creativity Hence, the women sports are less famous than men sports.
Furthermore, the infrastructure provided to women to show up their talent a also other reason of less popularity of women sports. To add more in this, government gives more fund to man sport than women sports for instance an cricket presently A grade male player's salary is almost 10L per match for where as it has less than 1L per match for women To beside this media and TV are not showing any news of women achievements rather than they are busy in showing tiny take of any famous sportsmen.a
The result of this will definitely effect adversely on the nation growth. If women do not get support from their society then they never able to show their creativity outside to the world. It effect on women it self as well as country's economy. There are many tournaments organizing for female sports too But, became of not getting proper training and support from the society women can't able to attend those tournament in the result of that women earn less than what she should get. This will eventually effect if national economy system.
To recapitulate, it is reiterate that women sports are not getting proper support to show their talent it makes negative impact on the development the nation.
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Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78873239437 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41485188389 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50985915493 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.223239177 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269804141678 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10021065666 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426681188248 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157700445149 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287671467431 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.