Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?
Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?
Every species in this world including human is a part of environment cycle. Some people says that we should only save those animals which are useful to people in their daily life, which is true. However, I disagree with the claim because other animals are also important for nature balance.
Human are depending on some of the animals such as cow, buffalo, goat,camel and so on. But wild animals are part of environment. In environment cycle every animals are depending on other one, one way or another. We know that deer feed from the grass or tree and it become food for line. After death of line the body of line decay and it mix with the soil of earth. This creates fertilizer which is useful for grass to grow and again ecosystem begin from grass and it's continuous process. In this process there are many other animals including wild animals are essential for keeping the nature in stable.
Moreover, keeping all the animals safe will help human in another way too. For instance, there are many incidence happened recently, wild animals such as line, tiger are coming outside from the jungle and they are making target to the human as their food source. This is happening because they are unable to find food in forest. Hence, if we protect all the animals in this world then this problems can be solved.
However, there are some negative points of saving too many animals. If the number of forest animals become more than what it required then they might come outside from the jungle and hunt the people of the societies. So it can't be tolerable if animals number become unstable. Otherwise nature cycle become unstable.
To recapitulate, it's responsibility of human to protect all the animals in this world. Which can keep nature in stable.
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Every species in this world including hu...
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...e also important for nature balance. Human are depending on some of the anima...
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...rtant for nature balance. Human are depending on some of the animals such as cow, buf...
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...balance. Human are depending on some of the animals such as cow, buffalo, goat,came...
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...f the animals such as cow, buffalo, goat,camel and so on. But wild animals are part of...
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...ent. In environment cycle every animals are depending on other one, one way or another. We kn...
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...deer feed from the grass or tree and it become food for line. After death of line the ...
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...h of line the body of line decay and it mix with the soil of earth. This creates fe...
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...ecosystem begin from grass and it apos;s continuous process. In this process ther...
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...al for keeping the nature in stable. Moreover, keeping all the animals safe w...
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...nother way too. For instance, there are many incidence happened recently, wild animals such as...
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...tiger are coming outside from the jungle and they are making target to the human ...
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...tect all the animals in this world then this problems can be solved. However,...
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...ld then this problems can be solved. However, there are some negative points ...
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...erwise nature cycle become unstable. To recapitulate, it apos;s responsibilit...
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... protect all the animals in this world. Which can keep nature in stable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77597402597 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30579606207 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49025974026 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7380933093 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.55 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219206330222 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670062734299 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923105794254 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139505429206 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956785359732 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.