The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the table provided reveals the standard annual expenditure on their different living costs of students of university in three various countries. It is manifest from the table that students of country A spent highest money and students of country C spent least money for their different amenities.
According to the table, total spending of students who studying in university of Country A and country B are US$5000 and US$4500,it is the highest total spending rather than county C.learners who studying in university of country A has spent 45 percent for their housing cost. While, students of country B spent 35 percent ,this is very high in both countries. Pupils of both countries spent almost similar money for food purpose which are 22 percent and 28 percent respectively. Country A's students spent 3 percent on books. Whereas, in country B spent three time more percent on books. To addition to it, learners of both countries country A and country B spent almost same percentage of total spending on leisure amenities, which are 22% and 23%. Moreover, 8 percent and 5 percent spent on other needs by scholars who studying in university of country A and country B respectively.
In country c, students spent highest on food which is 36 percent than spent 30 percent on accommodation. 21 percentage and 12 percent spent money on books and leisure amenities. While, the least(1%) spent on miscellaneous needs.
Overall, it is interesting to note that country A and Country B spent highest cost on house. While, Country C spent on food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
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Suggestion:
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... Country B spent highest cost on house. While, Country C spent on food.
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... house. While, Country C spent on food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97692307692 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77956405419 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423076923077 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.3073970967 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0830817149154 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427604549576 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544079406479 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654501401713 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730393345039 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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