Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer.
Armed forces are made by government for defence their country from terrorism. Although, in many regions, women are able to join the defence forces as men but some people believe that women should not join the army. However, only men should join the army. So, i strongly disagree with this notion.
To begin with, sometimes female could do hardest work rather than male. So, government should give similar opportunity to female for join armed force and save their country as well as their family. Hence, they earn some money for their family and they teach some defence trick to their children for protect themselves. Therefore, remove inequality from the society and an the human power.
Furthermore, there are many ladies who doing crime in the country.Thus, government should recruit ladies arm force for catch the. Therefore, it would decreased rate of crime in across country and make terrorist free country. Moreover women have good communication skill. So, they could work as a privet agent for their country but ladies need some powerful training as well as opportunity. For instance, many women win medals and award in the india. India give some opportunity to female for joining military. So, that is whay women do work as men in armed forces.
On the other hand, every girl is not brave and they have not ability to join military for defence purpose because they have not knowledge about defence force and no strength for do work as a soldier. Thus, people think that only men are able to join army, navy or air force.
To recapitulate, government should give opportunity to women for show their talent and creativity as well as give chance for defence their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95070422535 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39925970531 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517605633803 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8770853072 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1111111111 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290985949492 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104847895981 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805897290235 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18667637853 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591451722826 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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