The table below gives information about the average anuual spending of university students in three differrent ccountries,summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table compares the yearly expenditure of students of university in different sectors which are accommodation, food, books, leisure and other miscellaneous things in three countries. In this table, countries have not any specific name but it have name like country A, country B, country C.
In the Country A, students spent total $5000 annualy on various things.In addition to it, 45 percent doller of total cost spent on accommodation.It was highest cost rather than food, books, leisure and other living costs. Meanwhile, food and free cost were simillar(22%), While, books and other costs were not same but it was very lowest.Leaners spent 3 percent of cost on book and 8 percent on other things.
In the country B, it was almost same as the country A.Scholars spent total $4500. Spent much money on accommodation by students which is 35 percent, it was 10 percent lesser than country A's accomodation cost. Cost of food and leisure ware almost parallel, it difference was around 4%. 9 percent spent on book and 5 percent spent on other different things.
In country c, pupils spent total $1500 on living costs, in which, 30 percent spent on housing and highest money spent on food which was 36 percent. Moreover, 21% spent on books and 12 percent on leisure activity cost. However,the least 1 percent spent on other things.
Overall,it is intresting to note that students of country C spent more money than Students of country A and country B, they gave more priority for books and food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93700787402 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70235945157 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492125984252 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1624998397 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0289635440141 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0151709274287 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289647941142 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0244067684626 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228426390045 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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