The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table compares the total average expenditure of university of three countries, namely Country A, Country B and Country C, and also percentage of that budget use for different activities. Generally speaking, its manifest that university annual budget is highest in Country A with compare to remaining two countries.

Its clearly from the table that highest percentage of university in country A budget($5000) use for student Accommodation, which contain 45%, Where as educational institutes in County B spends 35% of their total annual budget($4500) for the same purpose. In Country C the average budget per year of any university is $1500, which is least among given three countries, which spend 30% of that budget in accommodation. Country B used their 36% of budget in use of food for student which is 6 more than country A and 8 less than country C for that purpose. Moreover, the percentage of total budget spends for books in country A is 3%, where as that is 3 time more and 7 time more for country B and country C respectively. Country A and Country B both are following almost same pattern in supporting leisure activities, they spend 22% and 23% for that purpose respectively, Which is almost half(12%) in country C. For other activities , country A, B and C spending 8%, 5% and 1% of their total budget respectively.

Overall, all the three country's universities are diverting their almost two-third portion of their annual budget for accommodation and food purpose of students.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.968 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95061815921 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.296126089 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118137768031 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717964448951 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433285200297 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101208051214 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301369760314 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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