Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment , only government and big companies can make a difference . To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environment has always been a hot topic in the past decades. However, there is a hot debate over whether the individuals or government bodies are more potential in environment developing. In my point of view, human being obviously has massive influences in environment changes .
First and foremost, since regulatory authorities have to tackle on numberous problems, hardly can they attach special important to improve the environment . Economy Growth is their prior concern , which is shown clearly via the economic races between countries. Eventhough authorities do take actions on developing the ecosystem, big changes can't be made when they dont really put their heart in it.
Second, there is no doubt that individuals have a significant effect on the environment. A single person might only make tiny difference . However, if more and more people connect and unite , it will briskly build a community , which create a profound effect on environment. The research illustrates that two- third volunteer organisations are non-governmental organizations. This is the strong evidence that proved the human impact on the ecosystem.
Last but not least, a single person can surely make an incredible influence on environment. A personage, who plays a vital role and has integral impact in social life, can easily speak up about the topic which also inspire the majority of people. Whether an individual can affect plenty of people, there is no denying that a few more personages could possibly change the most of the world.
By way of conclusion, there is no need to identify who triumph in environment improvement. Both governments, great companies and humanity must join their hands in addressing this worldwide issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, third, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44280442804 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02902500916 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656826568266 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5192773355 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202631038194 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533659853671 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437263198892 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893946909049 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300458401356 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.