One of the tools which people can defend them self is gun. I think the gun is the last way to defend. Also, individuals should not be allowed to carry guns because it is unnecessary and can be replaced with peace. In addition, guns instead of solving a problem cause many problems.
I believe guns should be destroyed and replaced with peace and friendship. I read on a newspaper that one country closed its military and does not allow people to carry guns or other weapons. After that, this country has been the most peaceful country in the world. By putting aside guns and respecting each other’s ideas, we can conclude that guns are unnecessary.
Some people think to defend them self they need a gun. However, if they think precisely they find out that this gun can kill them as well. If they do not have experience, maybe they injure them self or other people by coincident. In that point of view, this causes many serious problems. So, it's better to choose alternative ways such as calling the police or learning self-defense.
In conclusion, to use guns individuals should be trained and without training maybe they injure them self or others by coincident. However, by looking at that country it is practical to put aside guns and make a peaceful world.
- English is spreading all around the world as a global language. is this a positive or negative development? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55142706153 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6589177018 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.4 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134067939204 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527927732694 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791769724284 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932901795926 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03809976404 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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