Having a deterimental impact on environment by individuals is becoming a grave concern. Influence on people of causing a disappearance of certain species. I will discuss reasons along with solutions in upcoming paragraphs
There is no doubt to say that some species has been totally disappeared due to the technology, because nowadays people want just comfortable zone ,they do not think about others . To cite an example, a survey conducted in India resulted that 90% brown sparrows effected due to the 4G rays. It is very pity to say that nowadays people do not have interest in the environment , they are just living but they do not care about their surroundings. Secondly, people have curiosity to eat meat ,like fish, they think that they can get better nutrition from meat , but alot of species are decreasing due to this.
This problem can be solved by putting some effective steps, firstly, mortals should lessen the usage of internet, because it is also researched by some scientists that if people will use internet in limit , many birds can be saved. Another is that people give preference to eat green vegetables instead of eating meat, because nutrition can also taken by fruits and fresh vegetables.
To conclude, I personally think that this issue can be solved by taking some steps by individuals and the government.
- The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school To what extent do you agree with this statement and why 58
- Influence of human beings on the world s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity What are the primary causes of loss of bio diversity What solutions can you suggest 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01801801802 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77234194595 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9395172082 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.777777778 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727400941137 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0329119291002 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288070549451 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504675327851 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150397286968 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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