influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity.
what are the primary causes of loss of bio - diversity ?
what solutions can you suggest
The globalization has changed many aspects of the planet earth so as on ecosystem also. due to modernization and civilization human has changed bio-diversity. they are doing everything to satisfy their lavish life without thinking other inhabitants life and side effects they have made to the environment in the name of progress. There are many reasons why many species have extinction and loss of bio-diversity.This essay shall discuss some reasons and will measure some solutions.
To begin with,The most problematic reason is the deforestation that eliminated some species.people are migrating towards cities for their betterment as a result,cutting of many trees and minimise forest to expand city to meet over population.Therefore many inhabitants loss their food and shelter which they are getting from jungle and would not survive any more.For example,everyday number of lions are decreasing till minimal level due to no favourable place for survive.
Moreover,air pollution is one of the major issue that everyone are facing today.The manufacturing companies and cars and many more are generating fumes by using of fossil fuels and that damage the ozone layer across the world so that many devastating natural disastrous are facing every walks of life such as flood,storm and so on.
The solution is not each as earth is on the blink of climate changes.people should use more eco-friendly vehicles to prevent warming,use more public transport to commute their daily routine.The government should organise awareness events and campaign to educate people the benefits of using environ mentally friendly materials.The government should offer all basic amenities to the villagers so that they can not migrate to the urban areas and have found alternatives resources which are energy-efficient.
To overall,government and personal both have to take part to save ecosystem and to protect precious species to complete this system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32940625046 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622895622896 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.791532535 49.4020404114 327% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.875 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.125 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103711342788 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577959934707 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060566767842 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523110150265 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509558767686 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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