Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.) Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
It is an undeniable fact that the crucial impact of artificial intelligence in our modern lifestyle. Most people believed technology gives people opportunities and freedoms to do their jobs from anywhere besides home and work in the most convenient way. I totally agree that this flexible way of working leads to various benefits that outweigh the detrimental effects and attempt to discuss it with my own knowledge.
Admittedly, there are some people who may doubt the effectiveness of working outside. It will be so difficult to concentrate on working without being affected by external factors. Also, workers seem to be stressed and busy due to the amount of work they have to do are being increased.
On the other hand, computer technology is unquestionably played an influential factor in the way people do their jobs. First of all, nowadays, more and more careers allow individuals to work in their homes instead of offices as usual. The whole world, for example, is facing a very stressful and serious epidemic of Covid-19 that leads to many difficulties for people in continuing their work. Therefore, the governments promulgate social- distancing policies and encourage citizens to stay and work in their houses.
Furthermore, information technology allows us the freedom to get in touch immediately and conveniently, anywhere and anytime we want. As a result, humans will be able to communicate with their colleagues and companies when they coming up against difficulties. In addition, in some special and extraordinary cases, employees can easily perform and handle their work directly without having to go to their homes or workplaces. For instance, if employees are notified of emergency situations at work that require their presence, they can work with their advanced technology devices such as laptops, tablets, smartphones, etc while being on public transports or holiday vacations with their families.
In conclusion, in the modern digital industrial era, technology has changed significantly the way people work and play. In spite of having some drawbacks, the benefits of this equipment are extremely important for everyone in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27941176471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90661308983 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 340.0 20.2975951904 1675% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1795.0 106.682146367 1683% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 340.0 20.7667163134 1637% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 187.0 7.06120827912 2648% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384344376563 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.384344376563 0.084324248473 456% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189819296652 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652214426391 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 173.4 13.0946893788 1324% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -282.08 50.2224549098 -562% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 137.1 11.3001002004 1213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.82 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.33 8.58950901804 295% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 138.0 10.1190380762 1364% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 138.0 10.7795591182 1280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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