Trend of people who visit other country for tourism has increased nowadays. Some people argue that it will bring some negative effects such as pollution and overcrowded in tourism spot whereas I believe it is a positive trend for two reasons.
First, international tourism will bring benefit for country’s income. That is why countries over the world compete to bring as much foreign tourists to their country by make interesting advertisement, fix and build tourism spot so it will attract tourists especially those from abroad to come visit their countries. Indonesia creates ‘Wonderful Indonesia’ slogan also build new tourism spot called Mandalika which has excellence facilities such as race circuit and hotels. Besides, tourism will help to increase local economy for example in Bali, local resident will have job opportunity that related to tourism such as tourist guide, selling crafts, restaurant, etc.
Equally important, international tourism is an opportunity to know different cultures from different countries. Not only It such a free ads to introduce cultures from tourism place but also by knowing different cultures it will help to increase knowledge, tolerance and understanding between people from different cultures and countries. For examples Indonesia cultures like Batik, Gamelan, Dangdut, are popular in another countries because of tourism even some countries like Australia - which has large numbers of tourists who visit Indonesia every year - and Canada teach Indonesia language (Bahasa) in their formal school.
As conclusion, international tourism may bring some negativities but government and local society can make efforts to decrease it by makes rules and campaign to save environment in tourism spots. But as it has more positive effects, people and government should support each other to escalate international tourism in their beloved country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'ad'?
Suggestion: ad
...rent countries. Not only It such a free ads to introduce cultures from tourism plac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, whereas, as to, even so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65156794425 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92731927977 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4203924937 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.454545455 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160718550993 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739104810546 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571579942695 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124961806116 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641195786425 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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