Since the inception of globalization and internet, tourism has emerged as one of the most profitable sectors in many countries. Moreover, since when people have started to use internet, more awareness is spreading among people about international travel. To attract more and more people, many countries provides multiple facilities to the tourists such as Visa on Arrival as well as cheap accommodations. This essay will discuss about the benefits and as well drawbacks of this trend.
Firstly, travel wasn’t very popular in old times due to the hardships and lack of the proper transportation facilities. However, this is the not the case anymore and since when the new ways of transportation facilities such as high-speed trains and air planes, etc have come into picture, people are willing to see the world more than ever. Apart from this, there are various countries around the globe, whose entire economy depends on the tourism sector. Hence, in order to attract more and more tourists, they promote tourism as well as facilitate it.
Next, nowadays tourism is considered as one of the most significant industries in any countries. Tourism has an important role in boosting local as well as national economy of the host country. With the foreign money flooding in, people from the host countries usually take their business to the next level and also enhances their lifestyles.
Lastly, though there are many advantages of the tourism industry, not many but some of its drawbacks may not be ignored. As per the research conducted by ABC University, tourist places which were less popular remained unspoiled more year than those which are quite popular to visit. This research shows that people have a tendency to destroy a beautiful place before moving to a new place.
In essence, tourism has become one of the most prominent sectors around the globe undoubtedly and helps people to experience new cultures. Moreover, it also helps immensely to improve the local people’s lifestyle. While on the other hand, tourism doesn’t have any detrimental effects on the host country, given the fact that they maintain their tourism spots constantly. Hence, in my opinion benefits of tourism certainly outweigh the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the not the'. Did you mean 'not the'?
Suggestion: not the
...sportation facilities. However, this is the not the case anymore and since when the new way...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23055555556 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75186665043 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4612029348 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.611111111 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26860505236 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772021626955 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869265477075 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138515668944 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641946975649 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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