In this age of technological advancements, children nowadays spend most of their time using their gadgets indoors. This habit leads them to various deceases and makes them aloof. Hence, they should always be encouraged to spend their spare time outdoor involving in group activities. While some people believe that team sport positively helps children in multiple ways, others think that this is a waste of time and children should be more study-oriented.
Firstly, in today’s world, children have several ways to spend their free time at home and almost all of them prefer to stay idle and be socialized through social media networks rather than going outside. This lifestyle makes them lazy, irritate and opens the way to multiple health issues such as heart-related issues and obesity. Therefore, to avoid these health conditions, parents encourage their children to be enrolled in some team-sport, where they could meet other youngsters outside social media and also could be involved in physical activities.
Next, team sport is not only helpful in improving youngsters’ health but it also makes them more confident and resilient. Moreover, by participating in group activities, they become more comfortable to deal with the crowd of people and also develop leadership skills. All of these skills are very crucial to lead a successful life, as well as a career.
Lastly, though encouraging youngsters for outdoor activities is definitely a good move, it shouldn’t be forced on them. If any child is reluctant to play in a group, the reason behind is must be understood. Parents should understand that not all the children are extroverts but introverts as well. If they lack interest in playing any sport, they should be allowed to discover their interests and should be persuaded accordingly.
In essence, undoubtedly group activities prove themselves useful in the long-run but they shouldn’t be imposed forcefully on anyone. In my opinion, parents should monitor their offspring's day to day activities without being intrusive and then decide to direct them to a healthier lifestyle which may include various outdoor activities not just team-sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37134502924 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93277185977 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4996299328 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8125 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169473798424 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565469489396 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579389863161 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968577453998 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040248422602 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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