In the fast-moving world, traveling became the most common and unavoidable aspect of everyone's life. There is an increase in the number of wanderers from one country to another and international traveling is beneficial for travelers as well as countries, which has both pros and cons. This essay will discuss why the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages of international traveling.
To begin with, In the early years due to the lack of traveling facilities people did not travel much. However, everything is changed and because of the advent of technology, there is a development in traveling facilities. For instance, we have airplanes and ships to travel to various places in the world. As people are traveling, they can get a chance to learn about the cultures and traditions of different people. It is the best opportunity for the world to promote their cultures and traditions. In addition to that, it economically benefits countries because of travelers using transportation and plays a significant role in the countries economies. there are various number of breath-taking views and ancient monuments all over the world so by traveling people get a chance to see those views and study about the history.
In contrast, it has a few disadvantages by allowing people from different places. The main disadvantage is the loss of culture because native people are learning the ways of tourists by neglecting their traditional ways. For instance, people learning languages because of an increase in the number of tourists and it costs their native language and there is a change in the way they cook and the clothes they wear. other than culture, government constructing places and taking steps to attract tourists which eradicates countries' traditions.
To conclude, there are advantages and disadvantages of international traveling for both tourists and countries. I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and the essay discussed how.
- Somepeoplethinkthatmuseumsandartgalleriesshouldconcentrateontheworksoftheirowncountriesinsteadoftheworksofartfrom otherpartsoftheworld.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagre 11
- Some people think that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. 56
- Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinions on this? 78
- International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages. 73
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world Some people think that this can not be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 656, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ficant role in the countries economies. there are various number of breath-taking vie...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...ay they cook and the clothes they wear. other than culture, government constructing p...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which eradicates countries traditions. To conclude, there are advantages and di...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30225080386 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10123908359 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504823151125 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7069233483 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272797124409 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095976019797 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938576489468 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205709421187 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129962692181 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.