Internet is becoming a dominant element in modern life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?
Internet has, undoubtedly, become a crucial part of the modern society due to its benefits to individuals of various ages and occupations. Apart from its advantages, it must be acknowledged that there are related problems that could be detrimental to users. This essay will examine the merits and demerits of the Internet to today’s life.
On the one hand, the Internet could provide the fastest access to a plethora of information without tedious searches through heavy books. There are numerous websites with reliable sources of different topics related to international news, mathematical exercises and history. By using educational websites, high-schoolers could progress without solely relying on extra classes after school. Moreover, the Internet is a versatile form of entertainment as it entertains people with programs of movies, games and television shows. For example, using the Internet during leisure time for films or relaxing games can effectively alleviate officers’ stress from a competitive workplace.
On the other hand, the Internet also causes trouble alongside its advantages. The first problem is that a prolonged exposure to phone screens while browsing the Internet could wreak havoc to eyesight. For instance, excessive screen time on the Internet could precipitate the process of shortsightedness. Furthermore, the Internet lacks efficient filtration mechanisms for information; thus, misleading news could easily deceive society. There are malicious posts about social or economic matters on Facebook that intend to misinform the community. Therefore, being exposed to such inaccurate news on the Internet might create a distortion in the public's awareness about specific issues, contributing to societal underdevelopment.
In conclusion, although the advent of the Internet has revolutionized the way people approach information and entertainment, it is undeniable that using it without limitations could damage users' eyesight and social awareness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 647, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...ternet might create a distortion in the publics awareness about specific issues, contri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89619377163 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17500022508 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7201468207 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225473955252 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754733316495 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055674602176 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132300710255 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477589701726 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.