In recent times, the World Wide Web has revolutionized the way we share and use information. However, it has brought problems to our lives. One serious issue, especially among teenagers, is cyberbullying. A possible solution would be to criminalize this behavior with tough measures such as police prosecution.
A growing issue associated with the internet is that it has become easier for anonymous users to attack others via social media platforms. One age group in particular that this phenomenon affects are teenagers who often use smartphones and social media to communicate. As a result, worldwide there have been cases of online bullying and threats among this age group with terrible consequences to this activity, such as young people committing suicide. To illustrate this, a study from the Samaritans in the UK in 2014, stated that a large proportion of 13 to 18 year olds they had been a victim of online bullying and even contemplated suicide.
One possible way to tackle this problem would be to implement tough legal measures to stop this growing threat to people online, particularly youngsters. This would mean schools involving police community support officers when a cyberbullying incident is reported. Consequently, a bullying incident can then be investigated fully and a prosecution can be carried out. For instance, fines or community service for serious offenders, in addition, child support officers can give assistance to the victims to ease psychological damage. In the case of adults carrying out online harassment and threats, possible prison terms or heavy fines could act as a deterrent.
To sum up, due to the way the internet has changed how people share information and communicate, online harassment has become a serious issue especially among youngsters. To tackle this, criminal prosecutions would need to be implemented to crack down on this behaviour.
- The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 73
- It is sometimes suggested that primary schoolchildren should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
- The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decade This has made overseas travel much more accessible Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 89
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others believe that are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- The internet has changed the way we communicate Much communication todayhappens through social media 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, so, then, for instance, in addition, in particular, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04882308805 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9413672898 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125005947582 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440882138876 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424823706322 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856475120335 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302200159792 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.