The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
The internet has changed significantly the way data is shared and used; as a result, there are many issues that were generated, which did not exist in the past. In my opinion, the loss of private information is the most dangerous problem but this problem can be solved by raising people's awareness.
One of the major consequence of sharing and consuming information is that people are stolen their personal data when using the internet. As in the present time, humans can connect to the internet easier than the past; thus, users' information can be shared freely and stolen easily. Due to that, a hacker can base on those data and try to hack a bank account to take clients' money. It has been reported by 2015 in the United State report that the significant increase in the percentage of people who were stolen the private information by 10%. If this problem continues, the economy of a country will be affected considerably in the next few years.
Fortunately, there are various measures that can be taken to protect personal information, one of which is to create a TV program about technology an information. That increases the chance the people will realize the consequence of sharing and consuming information on the internet and its negative effects. This is the first and most important step before any further actions can be taken, such as the governments should check websites' background and security before pushing those on the internet. By doing so, the negative effects of sharing and using data on the internet can be reduced substantially.
In conclusion, private information is now an important issue that people are facing today, despite people's awareness are raising. Governments take a step to protect people's information, nevertheless, the danger of the internet will be lessened.
- The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. 73
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 56
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. 67
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05016722408 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82308324276 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518394648829 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1126372181 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229811808571 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876508950639 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525527271822 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154648771867 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074057479119 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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