The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the problems associated with it and disscuss the possible way outs.
With the emergence of internet, the world has been undergone a great transformation over a past few decades. It is irrefutable to say that has given us several methods of receiving and spreading information among people, but this phenomenon is not without drawbacks. This essay highlights the issue that are related to information sharing and I will discuss the possible resolving methods to combat with this matter.
One predominant trouble which has been coming in sharing information over a past few years by internet is lack of security. As, when people send their personal documents through websites to other people for own purposes, at that time, some cunning individuals not only hack their personal information but also they misuse it. As a result, owing to the malicious users, human beings feel afraid while of sharing their personal data on these kind of online websites. A recent survey conducted by 'Times of America' revealed that about 50% of information is shared by the humans which is hacked by notorious people either for spreading fear among people or for using this information unethically and it occurs due to scarcity of security of data.
In order to tackle with the given issue, there is a need to nip the problem in the bud.one possible way out of the problem of dearth of security is that government ought to be launched a unprecedented hacker tracking softwares to provide the safety to the human beings from the malicious people. Another method to alleviate with this issue is that officials should begin an encryption methods. By doing this,people can share their personal information without any fear.
In conclusion,although,sharing and consuming information from internet has some downsides in terms of lack of security,it can be fixed by launching softwares against hackers and by making coding system it helps for safing the personal data of people's
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[9]
Message: The adjective afraid is used with 'to': 'afraid to while'.
Suggestion: afraid to while
... the malicious users, human beings feel afraid while of sharing their personal data on these...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...while of sharing their personal data on these kind of online websites. A recent survey con...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is that government ought to be launched a unprecedented hacker tracking softwares...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...gin an encryption methods. By doing this,people can share their personal information w...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ds. By doing this,people can share their personal information without any fear. ...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , although
...ation without any fear. In conclusion,although,sharing and consuming information from ...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...e downsides in terms of lack of security,it can be fixed by launching softwares aga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00469077253 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3977336029 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187143693916 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691717215753 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408555377756 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111329877716 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435166204673 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.