The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The internet has grown to be one of the most effective means for trip planning. however, it is often people argue (it is often argued that) (people often argue that) that there is no point in traveling overseas when one can see and gain knowledge about other nations and countries. while I agree internet has many benefits for many people, I would argue about internet effects on people and foreign countries.
Nowadays, the Internet provides people a wide range of information about all countries across the world. With the aid of the internet, people can research about the countries they like to pay a visit and reach any information they are looking for such as watching videos or reading people’s comments on Google which is a mega search engine, and Youtube which is an online video sharing and Twitch which is the streaming platform. Therefore, people do not need to travel across the world in order to gain knowledge about their culture and traditions.
To counter the above argument, firstly, some of these platforms are not free and if anyone is looking for an accurate answer, they have to pay for a subscription. However, there is still many helpful sites that could help people to experience what they have not had through the internet even if these sites are editable and are based on personal information. Secondly, by exposing them to new places, a new societies, or even cultures people can reform their view of the world and open their minds while using the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
...most effective means for trip planning. however, it is often people argue it is often a...
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Suggestion: that
...is often argued that people often argue that that there is no point in traveling overseas...
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Suggestion:
...ften argued that people often argue that that there is no point in traveling over...
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Suggestion: While
...edge about other nations and countries. while I agree internet has many benefits for ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'society'?
Suggestion: society
..., by exposing them to new places, a new societies, or even cultures people can reform the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85098039216 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47098036104 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7859445878 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.444444444 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88888888889 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205257275754 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866015741668 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499528280451 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12733798869 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435745223168 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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