It is almoust imposible to keep our tradition in a global community.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is undoubtedly that many people nowadays could live and study abroad and most of them believe that they can keep their traditions and habits. I partially agree with this assertion, while it can be true in some cases, however, I would argue that it is quite challenging to keep it unchanged.
On the one hand, people tend to change their lifestyle to suitable with their environment. For instance, students who study abroad can’t attend classes in “ao dai” which is the traditional clothes in Viet Nam for many reasons. One of them is that it is quite uncomfortable when they wear this kind of clothes. Moreover, they may feel unconfident when communicating with teachers and classmates and then they would be isolated because of their differences.
On the other hand, people have their right to eat or drink what they want, so it is not surprising that traditional food is faded away gradually. Especially the young, when they hang out with their friend, they rather eat fast food and drink milk tea than traditional food. As a result, many Western and Korean restaurants are established and then become more popular in Viet Nam.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that many people these days have more opportunities to contact with other people of different cultures from all over the world. Therefore, changing is necessary and losing our traditions is inevitable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...ould argue that it is quite challenging to keep it unchanged. On the one hand, peopl...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Western seems to be countable; consider using: 'many Westerns'.
Suggestion: many Westerns
...tea than traditional food. As a result, many Western and Korean restaurants are established ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01298701299 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72909305018 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593073593074 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4216988571 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.272727273 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824247901136 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359026811072 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395976285881 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560418013326 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294520851781 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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