It is argued that parents of children who break the law should be punished as they are responsible for their children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a notion that parents should be penalized for the law-breaking of their children because of parental responsibility. While taking responsibility for the child as their parents are right, I believe that it is necessary to punish the juvenile for their wrong actions.
First of all, it is right for parents to take responsibility for their children's mistakes because children's misbehaviors stem from a lack of parental care. To make a full living, parents have to focus on their work and do not care much for their kids so the child depends on smartphones for entertainment without knowing about the effect of the content. Moreover, there is a misconception among some parents that they believe school is the best place to take care of their children so they leave their kids to keep concentrating on their job. However, some recent studies said that the rate of school violence has increased significantly in many countries because of these unprincipled.
On the other hand, I believe that children who commit directly must be punished in some ways. Firstly, the kids are too young to understand their behavior, so the punishment will help them realize the mistake, and they will not repeat their offense. When the child is not corrected about their fault, they will think that doing this action does not impact them and they tend to do it again. For instance, when a child steals some things out of curiosity, and without punishment, they will repeat their actions and possibly theft of valuables that affect society in the future. Therefore, deserved punishments should be given to them to reduce the cause of juvenile delinquency in the long term.
In conclusion, besides parents should take responsibility for the faults of their children, children also need to be punished for their misbehavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81772958248 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513333333333 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.9323924578 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439395667336 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184879036115 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114009370192 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323178597917 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680321547997 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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