It is believed that everyone should have an ambition to become successful in life. Is it really important to have these ambitions? Is being ambitious good or bad?
In this modern world, ambitions are necessary to live a prosperous and impeccable life. It is helpful to set targets and achieve it. It is pleasant to have an ambition and work hard to get successful future, although it should be reasonable to acquire.
On the one hand, ambition makes a person to dream of a greater aim, with the proper plans and gives his full potential to gain success. Being ambitious make us adaptable and tolerant. To break a record, one should word hard even in the bad climate. An ambition of becoming a Doctor, make people realize the skills need for it and work hard ...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-03 | drjowelynt | 63 | view |
- IELTS ESSAY Crime is a problem all over the world Some believe that crime prevention will make no difference others disagree Discuss both views and give your opinion 75
- Task 2:Science could help people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Would that be a good or a bad development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. 43
- In most countries prison is the most common solution when people commit a crime. However, if they were to receive better education, it could prevent them from becoming criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 60
- Every year rare languages disappear from the world. Some people say this is not important, because it is better to have fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 60
- It is believed that everyone should have an ambition to become successful in life Is it really important to have these ambitions Is being ambitious good or bad 88
Being ambitious make us adaptable and tolerant.
Being ambitious makes us adaptable and tolerant.
An ambition of becoming a Doctor, make people realize the skills need for it and work hard to fulfill it
An ambition of becoming a Doctor makes people realize the skills needed and work hard to fulfill the dream
Mahatma Gandhi ambition is to get freedom
Mahatma Gandhi's ambition is to get freedom
trying hard for impossible target result in stress,
trying hard for impossible target results in stress,
aiming higher ambition helpful to gain knowledge and required ways to accomplish it.
aiming higher ambition is helpful to gain knowledge, and it required ways to accomplish.
Though working hard for achievable targets is not easy, but smart way
Description: don't put 'although' 'but' in one sentence.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Words: 254 350
Still you have grammar issues. Read a good grammar book.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 254 350
No. of Characters: 1220 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.992 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.803 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.625 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.933 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.41 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5