It is believed that everyone should have an ambition to become successful in life. Is it really important to have these ambitions? Is being ambitious good or bad?
In this modern world, ambitions are necessary to live a prosperous and impeccable life. It is helpful to set targets and achieve it. It is pleasant to have an ambition and work hard to get successful future, although it should be reasonable to acquire.
On the one hand, ambition makes a person to dream of a greater aim, with the proper plans and gives his full potential to gain success. Being ambitious make us adaptable and tolerant. To break a record, one should word hard even in the bad climate. An ambition of becoming a Doctor, make people realize the skills need for it and work hard ...
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Being ambitious make us adaptable and tolerant.
Being ambitious makes us adaptable and tolerant.
An ambition of becoming a Doctor, make people realize the skills need for it and work hard to fulfill it
An ambition of becoming a Doctor makes people realize the skills needed and work hard to fulfill the dream
Mahatma Gandhi ambition is to get freedom
Mahatma Gandhi's ambition is to get freedom
trying hard for impossible target result in stress,
trying hard for impossible target results in stress,
aiming higher ambition helpful to gain knowledge and required ways to accomplish it.
aiming higher ambition is helpful to gain knowledge, and it required ways to accomplish.
Though working hard for achievable targets is not easy, but smart way
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